briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 2:05:05 GMT -8
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 2:23:45 GMT -8
Terracatta: is a spore pokemon the plates on the bottom of his body are a type of explosive clay that has its seeds inbedid in the bottom of each one.people usually use them as tank ammo and the most best part is they can rebuild themselves by retracting each part inward they talk like bricks hitting each other. all his origins are up in his top shell safe.the way the shell is shaped explosions can be absorbed and channeled back at the sender they levitate and can act as landmines.if a person is hit by the seed of this plant they should call 911 to get the seeds removed. it is wrecamended to ware builit proof armor when traing the plant. terracatta can withstand a grenade, cannon ball or c.foar and torpedoes and they are usually out in the army or navy acting as biological weapons and they grow from terracatta trees that grow at old war plots their are reckwiard by law to be listed in the n.r.a.
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 2:31:55 GMT -8
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 2:33:45 GMT -8
hes definitely a terracatta warrior
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Post by Blue Mew on Aug 10, 2014 6:23:58 GMT -8
Man I keep meaning to enter this but I keep forgetting. I'm gonna try to enter something tonight...
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Post by Makkilemore on Aug 10, 2014 7:23:39 GMT -8
hes definitely a terracatta warrior You can put both text and images in the same post. Put your descriptions right under the pictures, in the same post.
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Post by VGBMichael on Aug 10, 2014 13:55:18 GMT -8
briancrafte Can you please specify which category you're entering with each splice? I've already been told one of them is mine, but I need you to tell me yourself. If you've already said so in a post that got deleted then I apologize, but you still need to keep that sort of information visible at all times for cases like this where one of the judges wasn't here to see it. I'll judge your splice once I see the words, "smart entry" somewhere on it's post.
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 18:58:03 GMT -8
Look at page seven and you will see my smart splice
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 10, 2014 19:47:59 GMT -8
My smart entry is nepitus
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Post by Blue Mew on Aug 10, 2014 20:08:20 GMT -8
My entry for beauty. It's a majestic pegasus/unicorn combo (an alicorn, I think it's called???) anyways... The body and head are from rapidash, legs from zebstrika, wings from articuno, tail from reshiram, horn from cobalion, and the mane is keldeo's tail. Coloring: Reshiram (Body) Cobalion (Horn and wings) and Keldeo (Tail and mane).
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briancrafte
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Post by briancrafte on Aug 11, 2014 16:32:36 GMT -8
briancrafte Can you please specify which category you're entering with each splice? I've already been told one of them is mine, but I need you to tell me yourself. If you've already said so in a post that got deleted then I apologize, but you still need to keep that sort of information visible at all times for cases like this where one of the judges wasn't here to see it. I'll judge your splice once I see the words, "smart entry" somewhere on it's post. I had just messaged you
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Post by Blue Mew on Aug 13, 2014 13:29:15 GMT -8
Entry for cute! A teen itty bitty adorable mammalian. The body is from mudkip, the head is from eevee (the ears are the very tips of eevee's ears) the eyes are from victini and the mouth is from skitty. Oh and the tail is one of vulpix's tails.
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pigcatapult
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Post by pigcatapult on Aug 14, 2014 1:14:02 GMT -8
For the beauty contest. I don't have a name for the dear yet, though. Ideas?
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Post by Makkilemore on Aug 14, 2014 6:18:31 GMT -8
For the beauty contest. I don't have a name for the dear yet, though. Ideas? Another unconventional majesty. The neck is really long , even if you're going for a long neck, but its not terrible. Its also flatly shaded. The wing sits kinda awkwardly, and the tail feels kinda weird. 34/50. My entry for beauty. It's a majestic pegasus/unicorn combo (an alicorn, I think it's called???) anyways... The body and head are from rapidash, legs from zebstrika, wings from articuno, tail from reshiram, horn from cobalion, and the mane is keldeo's tail. Coloring: Reshiram (Body) Cobalion (Horn and wings) and Keldeo (Tail and mane). The shades are kinda weird. The dark one is too dark and it cuts off above the back leg very abruptly. Its also missing one darker shade present on Rapidash that your current dark could have been used for, to ease the transition. Apart from that, the mane doesn't really go very high. Still, a good splice in theory and not that bad in practice! 31/50.
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Post by Blue Mew on Aug 14, 2014 7:14:16 GMT -8
Thanks. It was late so I didn't realize until after I posted it how much the shading sucked welp there'll always be another contest.
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Post by VGBMichael on Aug 14, 2014 9:38:25 GMT -8
Thank you. (btw, you didn't need to pm me) Overall, this is pretty good. I can't even tell how creative you were with the parts because they blend together so well. You used a lot of different colors but those were also well-placed and go together very well. The only problem is the arms. I don't know if it's just the hands, or just the colors of the hands, but they look really out of place compared to the rest of the splice. This gets a 39/50
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Post by idk-jenny on Aug 14, 2014 11:15:45 GMT -8
Entry for cute! A teen itty bitty adorable mammalian. The body is from mudkip, the head is from eevee (the ears are the very tips of eevee's ears) the eyes are from victini and the mouth is from skitty. Oh and the tail is one of vulpix's tails. Kawaii ultra eyes alert. It is very adorable wow. But the only problem I have is how the farthest shoulder seems bulkier than the closest. It's simple yet cute. :) Would be nice if there was a bit more shading but since it's a small splice, it's not really required. I do like how the head is just small enough to work out. If it was too small, then it would have just look silly but you've found a perfectly decent sized cute head. 40/50
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Post by okami on Aug 14, 2014 12:57:56 GMT -8
If anyone posted anything for cool in the past 2 weeks or so im sorry i havent been able to judge it and i will as soon as i can, im in vt rn and the internet is literally 1 out of 5 bars so i can only play ssf2 and toribash and splice but i cant upload anything or do much, im pretty sure just posting this comment will take 10 minutes
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pigcatapult
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Post by pigcatapult on Aug 14, 2014 13:36:30 GMT -8
Okay, so, I'm assuming I'm not allowed to actually submit a revision, but, in the name of self-improvement, I still made one to see if I could fix the things you mentioned. I'm not expecting it to count for the purposes of the contest, but could you still grade it unofficially? Edit: It occurs to me that the second wing should be showing behind it. I should probably work on that. Edit2: Backwing is now go. Edit3: Also gave a bit more substance to the wing in front, but it might take Photobucket a while to log the re-upload there. Edit4: askfgjgkjh MORE REVISING because I can't stop tweaking this thing.
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Post by Makkilemore on Aug 15, 2014 6:35:42 GMT -8
Okay, so, I'm assuming I'm not allowed to actually submit a revision, but, in the name of self-improvement, I still made one to see if I could fix the things you mentioned. I'm not expecting it to count for the purposes of the contest, but could you still grade it unofficially? Edit: It occurs to me that the second wing should be showing behind it. I should probably work on that. Edit2: Backwing is now go. Edit3: Also gave a bit more substance to the wing in front, but it might take Photobucket a while to log the re-upload there. Edit4: askfgjgkjh MORE REVISING because I can't stop tweaking this thing. Oh yes, the neck is much better now. The highlight on the head is great, but that shade is a bit light for the body. Removing the other waves on the tail is a fine stylistic choice, but i think it was better before. Either way, excellent product.
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